Character Sample #5--Rejected Series Character Application
Note--This was not an actual application but one written by myself to show you what not to do.

Name: SaIlOr MoOn
E-Mail Address:  sailor_moon@sailor_moon.com
Homepage URL: http://www.sailormoon.com
Online Contact Info:  None
Ok to Post:  Yeah Yeah Yeah
Color Scheme:  Pink and Pink

CHARACTER INFORMATION

Name: Serena

Alias: Sailor moon

Birthdate: June 30

Astrological Sign: Cancer

Age: 14

Hobbies: eating, sleeping and Mamoru

Favorite Food: Sweeties

Least Favorite Food: Carrots

Favorite Gemstone: Sapphire

Favorite Subject: P.E.

Least Favorite Subject: Math

Favorite Animal: Bunny

Strengths: She's very nice, and very kind and she never lets her friends down

Weaknesses: She's clumsy and not too bright

Goals: To be a bride

Fears: Lossing her friends and her love

Personality: She's very energetic.  She hates studyin and school, because
she isnt' good at it.  She's always happy unless Rei calls her names.  She's
also very whiny

Not the best description, but this would be possible acceptable pending the rest of the app

Normal Appearance: She has long blonde hair that she keeps up in meatballs
and wears a school uniform

More description would be nice

Senshi Appearance: Look at the pic...http://www.here's the pic.com

Pig no-no.  Don't just send a pic

Powers Based On: Healing and Killing

Powers are off of what Sailor Moon's powers actually are.

Henshin Phrase: Moon Prism Power:  Sailro Moon spins around and her dress
appears.

Powers

Moon Tiara Magic
Moon healing Activation
Moon Speter Elimination
Moon Rainbow Killer

No description of that attacks

Weapons/Equipment:Her locket, her wand, her speter, her power pen and a new
rainbow broach that gives her the new power.

Doesn't describe the items at all

History:

Serena lives with her mom and dad and kid brother.  Tehy don't know she's Sailro moon.  She's also in love with Darien, a hunky college student.  but he doesn't know that theres a guy at her school named Jeremy Saterlee that has a crush on her and she's been avoiding him to save Darien's feelings.

First off the history is too short and she uses other characters in it that are fan fics when the characters are already established as not being in high school and the history doesn't even fit in with the setting.

Sample RP:

::Jumps in air:: No you can't take me out I have a boyfriend.

::Advances:: But Serena please, I don't have a date for the dance and Mamoru's out of town.

No jeremy no i can't.  ::Runs away::

::Follows:: Please..Please Serena..PLEASE

Sample RP is short and not written in the proper format

Quote: I am the fighter for Love and Justice int he name of the Moon i will right wrongs and triumph over evil..and that means you.

Notice also that there are grammar and spelling mistakes throughout...which is bad considering some names of even mispelled


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